EVALUATION FEEDBACK ON WORK SO FAR

KEELEY: good so far but lots still to do, don't forget to use the AS 2010 homepage for inspiration and to incorporate images. Also, the font size is too small and you should highlight key words to help your examiner. ZOE: Q1: Your examiner may not know Wix- make it clear that there's a page to turn with an arrow and Turn the page tab. Remember to use the AS 2010 homepage for inspiration and to give you direction e.g. Use Develop Challenge should have a section each and you should explain your choices fully Q2: Good- Don't forget terminology - stereotypes, preferred readings etc Q3:V Good, it isn't completely clear that the page continues below the home screen and your excellent work could be missed, perhaps an arrow or a Read Me sign? Q4 is Who would be the audience for your media product? Don't reword it. From there onwards, progressing very well with clear understanding and an interesting array of multimedia techniques OLIVIA: q1 & 2 excellent detail and understanding q3: distribute spelled wrongly in title and make it clear that page continues downwards- great info could be missed q4- would is spelled wrongly and needs more detail and images q5: excellent, again, make it clear that the icons are links, great work q6: great video- it was the lack of memory on the pcs that was the problem, not the programme, it's still premier pro on the macs but don't change it as the rest of your answer is detailed and relevant q7: there's more to say- music etc LIZZIE: Good homepage but the tabs are tricky to activate make the box larger or point out that the link is just below the shape- an impatient examiner won't take the time Q1 - good work but add a click me tab so that the examiner can find the information Also there's an extra page between develop and challenge so it could be missed Q2: Again, point out that the booklet needs to be clicked on the corner Q3: focus on British film distributors for a British film Q4: You need to specify the certification Q5: you've mispelled audience in the title Q6: Well done for adding the turn page instruction but it can't be seen against the red and white background, place it over the white section if poss Q7 - preliminary tash? but good detail. Well done.

Keeley Stamp Evaluation 7702

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Name: Keeley Stamp
Candidate Number: 7702

Zoe Essam Evaluation 7568

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Name: Zoe Essam
Candidate Number: 7568

Olivia Thomson Evaluation 7714

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Elizabeth Piggott evalution 7666

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Elizabeth Piggott Wix Evaluation
Candidate number: 7666

Opening Sequence Final Cut - Losing Gracey

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